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Sunday, August 8, 2010

Deadline Dames, ROD #18

It's time for the Deadline Dames, Readers on Deadline #18. This isn't the picture used as the prompt on their site, but since they ask that their pics not to be reprinted, here's one that I liked. If you'd like to see their gorgeous image, please click here.  If you'd like to try your hand, it's 250 words by August 11, 2010.  The prize this month:  A Cup of Normal by Dame Devon!

The Last of the Days

Grace stared up at the predawn sky. She turned to the east to catch the last glimpse of the sun she would ever see as it broke over the horizon.

This was never the life she had hoped to live when her marriage to Victor had been arranged, a midnight service held by candlelight. He'd been so beautiful, pale skin nearly glowing as he stood in the black of night. The ruby red stone he placed upon her finger glowed with the same eerie light.

She glanced down at her hand where the ruby still rested, all these centuries later. Soon it will be over, no more tomorrows.

It wasn't worth it, watching death come but never for her. The bloodlust was never satisfied, eating at her constantly. When Victor collapsed into death's embrace of day sleep, she slipped into her wedding gown, hidden away for all these years. The lace fragile and yellowed, but still wondrous to her eyes. The last thing her mother had given her. It was only fitting that the gown which bore her into endless night, should bear her into true death.

As the night's grip weakened, she watched the sky with sudden fascination. It turned from a deep purple to vivid pink, breathtaking. The pink bleached away to a pale blue, she'd forgotten it's beauty. Her skin tingled with the first wisps of the sun's rays. Just before the sun burst into life and she into death, she whispered, “Goodbye.”


Blodeuedd said...

Good luck :D
I should come up wit something quick if I wanna enter

Unknown said...

Hi B!

You know, I had forgotten about the Deadline Dames, I haven't entered for several months. But, I did love the image they used this time. Much better than the one I showed. Go take a peek, I think the pic will beg you to write something!

Dottie :)

Amy C said...

I always love reading your flash fiction stories, Dottie!

I love the picture that they have posted this time. I might have to try my hand at it.

Amy C said...

I did it, Dottie! That felt good to write my story. Thank you for always posting these :).

I'm gonna head over and submit mine, maybe add it to my blog too.

Blodeuedd said...

The image was so utterly beautiful! I could not stop myself and wrote something in 5 minutes :D

Will read your story tomorrow bwt

Unknown said...


I freaking love it, post it on your blog, let everyone read it, totally awesome!!! So love the feel of it, damn girl, you put mine to shame!!!! Now, you have to decide.... NaNo is only a few short months away.....


Dottie :)

Unknown said...

Hi Amy!

Your entry is sooo good, I'm embarrassed to have mine posted there, lol! Really girl, we NEED the book!! Great piece Amy!

Dottie :)

Blodeuedd said...

Aww thanks Dottie :)
I saw it and thought Dystopia, would love to write something like that, I mean something longer, hm...

Do I dare to post..we will see tomorrow, must write up a review today

Lea said...

Ooooh I'm sorry I missed this Dottie!!

GREAT entry.. It's so bittersweet. You brought a tear to my eye!!


Sorry, I've been out of the loop.. :(

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